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So sorry if you think Sasuke is OOC and if you don’t like it don’t read it

You sit there your hands covering your ears as you here the scream of delight from the girls when Sasuke got up to draw an object from the bucket. Your face was screwed up in disgust at the girls’ obvious lust filled eyes as they watched Sasuke. Glancing at him you evaluated him from beneath your eyelashes. Sure his face is mysterious from the whole black-blue hair and hes got the whole vampire thing going for him with his red eyes but otherwise he’s looks really scrawny, and has he ever even worked for anything seriously I mean if we evaluated things on willpower and hard work Naruto would be so much more hotter than him.  Though he’s pretty cute now especially now that his hairs getting longer.
You were so absorbed in your thoughts you didn’t hear the “ehems” till Sakura shoved into with her shoulder.
“Ouch! What was that for?!” You glared at Sakura.
Glaring at you as well she said, “YOU are going to be Sasuke’s partner for the game.” Sakura flicked her hair and glared at you then in an even snootier tone she said, “Get into the closet he’s already in there, and your making him wait.”
Grumbling the whole way in you muttered, “What is he the king for goodness sake’s” You rearranged (h/l) (h/c) and walked into the closet, Ino slamming it behind you. Sitting down you sighed and looked up at the ceiling. Going back to your early train of thought you thought now if we’re going for hot hard working and a whole lot of willpower Itachi’s got them all beat. Plus he’s a man not a boy.
“What are you think about that you don’t even notice me?”
Snapping out of your review you look down to find Sasuke had crawled half way atop of you and with your back to the wall you had nowhere to go. Blushing you tried to look away passing it off as nothing.
“I was really thinking of anything.”
“Now now you really shouldn’t lie to someone with Sharigan it doesn’t work that well.”
Grabbing your chin Sasuke forced your head down till yours was level with his. “Now tell me what you where thinking about or I’ll do something naughty to you.”
Blushing even worse because when you tried to wriggle away his arms had trapped your legs with in them and hips where in between your thighs so you couldn’t draw them up to bury your face in. Stammering you said, “I-I-I w-waasss”
“Was?” he questioned licking the corner of your mouth.
Your blush had reached your ears and you couldn’t quite breath right ,” j-j-just th-thinking.”
“Yes?” he said a smirk/smile at the edges of his lips drawing closer as till he nipped your lips then soothed them with a swipe of his tongue.
Your lips tingling from him you held your hands up in defense and blurted out the rest of your thought. “That your brother Itachi was so much cooler and sexier than you.” When nothing happened you peeked in between your fingers to see Sasuke’s eyes gleam with an unknown light.
“, you naughty girl you saying another man’s name while being held be another.” He fairly purred the words.
When, “Eekk” you gasped in shock when he pushed you to the floor in surprise your arms flung out once you hit the floor. Sasuke crawled on top of you pinning your wrists to the floor, “Now how should I punish the naughty girl for playing with my feelings. How about I make you flushed with passion so that when they open that door everyone will know who you belong to. And you are most defiantly mine.”
Your heart thudding like a rabbit faced with a snake you trembled as his mouth closed delicately around the tendon in your throat pinching ever so lightly with his teeth.  Lifting his head back he licked over the small wound he had made on your throat a smile on his lips. Frozen you heard the lock click as your seven minutes finally ended you jerked your wrists out of his grip and pushed him hard enough that he knocked into the back of the closet when the door opened you ran out of the closet and room with all the speed of a rabbit escaping the snake’s den.
Kiba walked up to Sasuke who was lazily stretching. “What did you do to her? You know she doesn’t like you that much.”
“Oh not much just showed her a few reason why she should reconsider liking me after all she is my dearest person.”
“You did always like the girl who played hard to get. You do know a lot of guys are going after her right?”
“That’s why I applied bug repellent to make sure all the pests stay away.” Sasuke said licking his lips with a satisfied smirk.
I do not own Naruto nor any of it's characters all credit goes to it's owner
I do own this story

Hoped you liked it and if you didn't don't comment
If you want another story just ask and which ever character I feel I can get a grasp on their personality I'll write
Also even if Sasuke seems OOC just think he's a spoiled child that wants whatever he wants and can't here the word no.

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cardboardbeast Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Uummmm... *fans self off* I'm literally dying that was so hot jfc
Flamingwingedwolf Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Any one else thought run forest run as we ran from sasuke?
IrisLam Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
me! lol
Flamingwingedwolf Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Great minds think alike
IrisLam Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
SanityIsNotKey Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Niice, I never expected him to be like that. Totally not OOC at all
keersyn132 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Oh damn.. that was wonderful. I'm going to the ground with her *faints*
Nepeta132 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I bit down on my spoon so hard that my teeth hurt now and the spoon is bent/bended

(damn my bad English skills from Finland  +-.-)
KooriTora Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014   General Artist
I hope your teeth are okay! Bonnie Warfstache 
But thank you Big Hero 6 Baymax (There There) 
kierasanderman321 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
tylrael Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconovariesplz: :iconifaintplz:
Oh my.....
SukiAckerman Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Artist
possessive much?
KagomeHonda Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
I love It. please make another? :)
Markita442 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Professional
I liked that ending... ♡.♡ Sasuke!!!!!!!
~Not having an FFM. Nope
KooriTora Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014   General Artist
Yep those possessive Uchihas
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omg!omg!omg! so cute!excited 
KooriTora Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014   General Artist
I love that picture & thankies
twinkbi0 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*dies from smexyness overload* asdfghjklqwertyuiopzxcvbnm (and great story btw)
XXMelodyDJXX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"That your brother was so much cooler and sexier than you."

Sasuke: OoO  T^T
I-RUV-SUSHI Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013

“That your brother Itachi was so much cooler and sexier than you.”


Imagine sasuke goes OOC  "Wait what" -cries forever-



Shadstheninjakitty Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Naughty Sasuke~! :iconpervysasukeplz:

Just the way I like em'

Great Job!!

I4MAH0M3STUCK3R Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
hot daaamn! :iconpervysasukeplz:
skylarluna Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Oh my jashin...*faints*
KooriTora Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013   General Artist
sasuke alien love icon 
katariandsasori Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
KooriTora Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013   General Artist
Not so lucky 
Midnight-in-the-city Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my glob! Part 2?! Please!!
Mia-Heiwajima Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
KooriTora Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013   General Artist
Thank you SASUKE 2 
Mia-Heiwajima Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
sasuke, you show those girls that im the one right for you >:) (lol :D)
xXChocoMelkGirlXx Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear... this is just... *faints*
KooriTora Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013   General Artist
Sasuke's a snakeSpyed (deviantART Co-Founder) 
xXChocoMelkGirlXx Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ermagod :iconamgplz:
KooriTora Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   General Artist
Pfft Relaxed 
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